tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post1101382076451551078..comments2024-03-28T09:50:13.187-04:00Comments on Group Blog: Passive vs. Active ~By Suzy LeopoldSue Heavenrichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00550259613381458435noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-89384658985576601432017-08-10T14:09:22.180-04:002017-08-10T14:09:22.180-04:00I needed this kick-in-the-pants reminder as I sit ...I needed this kick-in-the-pants reminder as I sit here editing! Julie A. LaCombehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04524135254827987715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-57937390007606663632016-09-15T19:44:51.553-04:002016-09-15T19:44:51.553-04:00Sometimes many words are needed to tell the story,...Sometimes many words are needed to tell the story, Jan. May your stories be true to your voice that include longevity.<br />~SuzyGarden Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14381204646734686433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-22761895522524205132016-09-15T19:41:02.749-04:002016-09-15T19:41:02.749-04:00Thank you for reading and saving this post, Charlo...Thank you for reading and saving this post, Charlotte. May all of your manuscripts be fabulous.<br />~SuzyGarden Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14381204646734686433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-60237541076226191672016-09-15T19:40:00.129-04:002016-09-15T19:40:00.129-04:00Hi Jarm:
Hope the chart comes in handy to support...Hi Jarm: <br />Hope the chart comes in handy to support your writing.<br />~SuzyGarden Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14381204646734686433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-81561749627601126202016-09-15T18:54:45.716-04:002016-09-15T18:54:45.716-04:00Brevity!
Levity!
Maybe that will add to my story&#...Brevity!<br />Levity!<br />Maybe that will add to my story's longevity?<br /><br />Suzy, I am a big offender of sharing too many words.<br />Appreciations so much, for this keen reminder.jan godown anninohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00091996699597066230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-13715338793694794072016-09-15T13:19:42.457-04:002016-09-15T13:19:42.457-04:00Thank you, Suzy, for these fab tips and examples :...Thank you, Suzy, for these fab tips and examples :) I've saved your post. Charlotte Dixonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16907242751556735710noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-42256702150867687452016-09-15T11:08:44.971-04:002016-09-15T11:08:44.971-04:00Thanks for the tips, Suzy! I've saved the char...Thanks for the tips, Suzy! I've saved the chart for further reference.Jarm Del Bocciohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16734893974122730211noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-61035237298755956502016-09-15T09:35:12.557-04:002016-09-15T09:35:12.557-04:00Hopefully passive/active sentences will no longer ...Hopefully passive/active sentences will no longer be an annoying bugbear for the readers of the GROG Blog. The check-list from The Write Life is a great resource. Thank you, Sue.<br />Garden Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14381204646734686433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-30293636764127348532016-09-15T09:27:13.826-04:002016-09-15T09:27:13.826-04:00Educators are always teaching. And you know this t...Educators are always teaching. And you know this to be true as a librarian. You are appreciated, Kathy.Garden Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14381204646734686433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-25923726656212149102016-09-15T09:16:17.852-04:002016-09-15T09:16:17.852-04:00great post, Suzy. passive/active is always a bugab...great post, Suzy. passive/active is always a bugaboo. And I love the check-list you included.Sue Heavenrichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00550259613381458435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-63279317211737766412016-09-15T07:42:48.358-04:002016-09-15T07:42:48.358-04:00Great way to teach what can be a difficult subject...Great way to teach what can be a difficult subject, Suzy! love the exercises, too.Kathy Halseyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11600954824509054774noreply@blogger.com