tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post8209137452296068914..comments2024-03-27T21:33:51.455-04:00Comments on Group Blog: STRETCH WITH A COPY CHANGESue Heavenrichhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00550259613381458435noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-82930831870617904102014-11-03T07:36:00.204-05:002014-11-03T07:36:00.204-05:00Todd you always delight with your poems! The line...Todd you always delight with your poems! The line I love and that was unexpected was--my toes tucked under the yellow dog. Then you surprise me with --I scribble away my dreams. Great last line! Thank you for sharing.<br />Janiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05348838681557893522noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-77717117064236495822014-11-02T12:04:35.955-05:002014-11-02T12:04:35.955-05:00Janie,
These exercises are so much fun. I'm l...Janie,<br />These exercises are so much fun. I'm late to the party, but like this nonetheless:<br /><br />Snuggly Feet<br /><br />so much depends<br />upon<br /><br />the right pair of socks<br /><br />speckled with gray and white <br /><br />just the right mix of wool <br /><br />keeping my ankles warm<br /><br />my toes tucked under the yellow dog<br /><br />I scribble away my dreams<br /><br />TBToddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13084776778987451806noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-83206636701405985162014-10-25T22:32:22.476-04:002014-10-25T22:32:22.476-04:00Garden Girl,
You are so right! Thank you for shari...Garden Girl,<br />You are so right! Thank you for sharing :)Janiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05348838681557893522noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-1876437257026191502014-10-19T12:40:11.775-04:002014-10-19T12:40:11.775-04:00Janie: Thank you for the excellent writing workout...Janie: Thank you for the excellent writing workout.<br /><br />so much depends<br />upon<br /><br />a positive, caring and thoughtful attitude<br /><br />that is willingly shared with family and friends<br /><br />beside one another, together; along the journey of life.<br /><br />~SuzyGarden Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14381204646734686433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-25993741076330025922014-10-17T19:35:58.543-04:002014-10-17T19:35:58.543-04:00Jan,
LOL! You are hysterical! Love it! JanieJan, <br />LOL! You are hysterical! Love it! JanieJaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05348838681557893522noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-10706631811378305512014-10-17T18:20:22.358-04:002014-10-17T18:20:22.358-04:00White chickens
know
so much depends
upon
vegetari...White chickens <br />know<br />so much depends<br />upon<br />vegetarians<br />planting vegetable<br />seeds with muck <br />from that<br />red<br />wheelbarrow<br /><br />c. jan godown annino<br /><br />Fun! Janie - appreciationsjan godown anninohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00091996699597066230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-32995494640655579672014-10-16T11:57:00.395-04:002014-10-16T11:57:00.395-04:00Awww. Can see them now. You know it's a good d...Awww. Can see them now. You know it's a good day with smiles at breakfast!Janiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05348838681557893522noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-15539004341951311562014-10-16T11:55:16.742-04:002014-10-16T11:55:16.742-04:00Patricia,
Love the image, especially the crisscro...Patricia, <br />Love the image, especially the crisscrossed poles! Amazing how 14 words can paint such a vivid picture.Janiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05348838681557893522noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-15513159936582767502014-10-16T04:31:48.889-04:002014-10-16T04:31:48.889-04:00Thanks, Janie! Very creative way to come up with a...Thanks, Janie! Very creative way to come up with a new poem! My first "stretch" with you:<br /><br />So much depends upon<br />little kids' moods,<br />topped with smiles<br />beside the breakfast tableTina Chohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02808651865125809841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-90974710057251185782014-10-15T23:27:16.600-04:002014-10-15T23:27:16.600-04:00Fun, Janie! Here's my shot at it:
so much de...Fun, Janie! Here's my shot at it:<br /><br />so much depends<br />upon<br /><br />unfurling <br />bean sprouts<br /><br />dusted with dirt<br /><br />beside the<br />crisscrossed poles.<br />Patricia Tohthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06878871084215411303noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-73835516782116472342014-10-15T14:21:32.253-04:002014-10-15T14:21:32.253-04:00Sue,
Your poem made me smile.:)Sue, <br />Your poem made me smile.:)Janiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05348838681557893522noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-2208273560426857562014-10-15T10:42:32.656-04:002014-10-15T10:42:32.656-04:00there are no white chickens,
no rain-glazed sides…...there are no white chickens,<br />no rain-glazed sides…<br /><br />just a red wheelbarrow full <br /> of rakes and seeds <br /> and dreams.<br />Sue Heavenrichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00550259613381458435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-51780115087955478482014-10-15T09:34:56.017-04:002014-10-15T09:34:56.017-04:00Wow! cute-n-cranky. You painted a picture in my mi...Wow! cute-n-cranky. You painted a picture in my mind that spoke of isolation, loneliness, but gave me hope of that coming letter. Well done!Janiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05348838681557893522noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1295379888006925064.post-27450629442295193162014-10-15T07:28:13.372-04:002014-10-15T07:28:13.372-04:00This was fun.
Winter Mailbox
so much depends
up...This was fun.<br /><br />Winter Mailbox<br /><br />so much depends <br />upon<br /><br />a battered black <br />box<br /><br />speckled with ice<br />butterflies<br /><br />beside the empty<br />road.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com