Showing posts with label Cardinal Rule Press. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Cardinal Rule Press. Show all posts

Wednesday, March 23, 2022

THIS COULD BE YOU: Craft Chat with Cindy Williams Schrauben and Book Review by Kathy Halsey

It's such fun to help writer friends celebrate their debut books. Like me, you may know of Cindy through her work over the years at ReFoReMo, which focused on mentor texts every March. Cindy had the Herculean task of organizing the picture book mentor texts by category or subject for the Facebook page files. After her years helping fellow picture book writers with comparative titles and mentor texts, it's so satisfying to feature Cindy Williams Schrauben with her own debut!


Book Review of This Could Be You

Educators and librarians, add this to your SEL, growth-mindset collection. Parents and grandparents, share as a fun read aloud with your children or grandchildren. This uplifting picture book from Cardinal Rule Press celebrates myriad of ways children can explore their world, dig into their passions, and help others. 

 

This Could Be You features avocations and careers traditionally explored for the K-second grade band, as well as other choices not as commonly known for the younger set. Readers are encouraged to see themselves as gardeners, farmers, police, teachers, along with writers and activists. The bright, engaging illustrations by Julia Seal ensure inclusivity as people of color, women, and the differently abled are included. Lyrical, rhythmic verse and internal rhyme make this a bouncy romp of possibilities enticing children to imagine who they could be.

This Could Be You by debut author Cindy Williams Schrauben and illustrator Julia Seal will be released April 1, 2022. 

Craft Chat with Cindy Williams Schrauben

 

Kathy: I know you’re a poet, but I’ve not seen the internal rhyme structure used as uniquely as you do in This Could Be You. Did early drafts begin this way? Did you suggest that the rhyme be bolded as an art note or did the art director suggest that?

 

Cindy: Actually, I used Give Me Back My Bones by Kim Norman as a mentor text. The first time I heard that fun rhyme scheme I knew I wanted to try it. Thanks, Kim. The format didn’t change, but early drafts were much different. The original title was Why Not You – thankfully that changed because a picture book with that title (written by an NFL quarterback and his wife) debuted this month. 

 

Bolding and hyphenating the phrases was my idea. I played around with other options such as italics before settling on this combination. Because many of the sentences are structured unconventionally, I wanted kids to realize the importance of stressing those phrases. I was thrilled when my seven year old grandson read it correctly right away.

 


 

Kathy: Your back matter focuses on changes readers can make to have a growth mindset and how parents/caregivers can engage young readers to think more deeply about their social emotional learning. Was this an add-on or an integral part of how you envisioned this book?

 

Cindy: I subbed This Could Be You with this back matter. The main text is important, but I wanted to include supplemental information for adults that will help them to adjust their own perspectives and tweak their everyday vocabulary, empowering their families/students with a growth mindset. It was always my hope to create a book that would have this kind of enduring impact.

 

 

Kathy: Tell us a bit about your journey to become a published author. What was surprising? Unexpected?

Cindy: There have been lots of surprises along the way. I had no clue how trying and long the journey would be, BUT I am so grateful that I was able to persevere with the help of the amazing kidlit community. The generosity and camaraderie is unlike anything I’ve dealt with. Another surprise is playing out right now – it is easy to think that once you get a book deal, you’re set. In reality, the marketing process has required a great deal of time and energy.

 

I was also blessed with a surprise after the book was printed. The reverse side of the jacket features a 27” x 11” poster – I love it. 

 

Kathy: I’m proud to be a member of your “street team” (folks who help spread the word about your debut). What are all the pieces, parts of your marketing campaign? How did your publisher, Cardinal Rule Press, help in this effort?

 

Cindy: Thank you! I couldn’t do this without my team. There are so many aspects to the marketing process. The key for me was finding ways to connect with my audience in a meaningful way – providing them with helpful content. I am lucky in that my book has a clear theme  – educating people about a growth mindset. I did lots of research regarding marketing a picture book, but ultimately had to pare my ideas down to those efforts that would be both effective and enjoyable for me – otherwise, I would have gone crazy. If you follow my social media you will see lots of silly things I have done like making felted bees, creating a six-sided puzzle with pages from my book, and painting a huge rocket photo booth. Will these things make a big difference? Maybe not, but it was fun and that is important, too.

 

I couldn’t be happier with the support and guidance I’ve gotten from Cardinal Rule Press. They offer Master Classes, Office Hours, and suggested timelines as well as extensive marketing efforts. The founder, Maria Dismondy and her team are phenomenal.

 


Kathy: What are you working on now?

 

Cindy: I am always working on several stories at once. I am a pantser for sure – I roll with whatever feels right at the moment. I never want to make my writing feel like work. I am looking for ways to give back to the writing community as soon as things calm down (after my launch). Besides that and marketing, I am working on an initiative I call, Partners in Literacy. It is a program in which businesses can sponsor my school visit by purchasing a book for each child from a local indie. I hope to kick it off soon. There is info on my website.

 


 

Cindy Williams Schrauben lives in Michigan where she writes books for kids that range from truly serious to seriously silly. Before embarking on this path, she held positions as a preschool administrator, teacher, and assistant director of a children’s museum -- always striving to empower kids. When not writing or honing her craft, Cindy might be found dissecting her grandsons’ shenanigans for story ideas, reading on the floor in the bookstore, or eating ice cream… ideally all at once.

 

You can connect with Cindy at www.cindyschrauben.com or www.direct.me/cindywilliamsschrauben

Wednesday, March 10, 2021

BUILDING A CONCEPT BOOK "SANDWICH" - LAYER BY LAYER, Guest Post by Michelle Schaub

 

Grog Blogger Eileen Meyer here -- I’m delighted to invite author and poet Michelle Schaub to join us with a guest post today! Michelle is sharing the story of a manuscript that was near and dear to her heart, but had been rejected numerous times. After she took a break to re-envision her project, and then revise accordingly – IT SOLD!

Here’s the story of KINDNESS IS A KITE STRING, releasing April 1st (and I'm not FOOLing you!) with Cardinal Rule Press.

 





When I first decided to write a concept book about kindness, this was my recipe:

 


Mix together a list of kind acts.

Fold in some lyrical language.

Season with rhyme.

 

Plain and simple. Unfortunately, a little too simple. Here’s some of editorial feedback I received after my first round of submissions:  

 

 

I don't think this feels like a real picture book, but more like something you'd see in a kid magazine.”

 

“I wish there were a clearer protagonist or some tension.”

 

“I love the message here, but I'm afraid that I don't think that there is enough story for this to work on our list.” 

 


Editors wanted a triple-decker club sandwich, and I all I had handed them was bread. I needed more layers to create a mouthwatering manuscript.

 

LAYER 1:  AN ARC

 

I knew most editors had a taste for character-driven manuscripts with strong story arcs. While I didn’t want to write my text as a narrative, I wondered if I could suggest an arc through the illustrations.

 

About this time, I saw a commercial that sparked an idea. Set in a city, the commercial starts with one man’s kind deed: he stops a lady from crossing the street in front of a speeding car. In turn, that lady helps a mom carry her stroller off the bus. The mom then helps another person, and the kind acts ripple forward.

 

I decided to use art notes to suggest a similar chain of kind deeds in my manuscript. As a rule, I try to limit art notes. I like giving illustrators room to breathe their own life into a picture book. But in this case, I felt the needed to provide a visual nudge to editors so they could picture how my simple words might ignite a rich visual narrative.

 

I added this open-ended art note to the beginning of my manuscript:

 

[For each spread, I have provided art suggestions for one possible way the chain of kindness might grow through a diverse community; however, I am open to other visual interpretations.] 

 

Then on each page, I included a short note that suggested a kind act and “actor” for that spread. Ultimately, Claire LaForte put her own delightful spin on my art notes.  She created a beautiful visual story of a diverse individuals coming together to spread kindness. 

 

 

LAYER 2: A QUEST

 

My own kids always enjoyed picture books where they had to search for something in the pictures. (Think Richard Scary’s Lowly Worm.)  This gave me the idea to suggest a “hunt” for a missing pet. So, I added this art note to the first spread:  

 

[No one notices a pet has slipped out. In subsequent illustrations, family members put up lost pet posters/search for pet]

 


In the final book, readers can follow the hunt for an adorable missing dog. (Don’t worry, the dog is ultimately reunited with its family.) 

 





LAYER 3: EDUCATIONAL HOOK

 

I wanted to make sure educators found my book tasty. As a language arts teacher, I knew curriculum standards across grade levels focused on teaching similes and metaphors. So, I started brainstorming tangible, kid-friendly objects to which I could compare kindness. 

 

Kindness is like sunshine because it warms you.  

Kindness welcomes others like an open door.  

When you let it out, kindness can lift spirits like a kite string.

 

To infuse educational flavor, I reshaped my text as a series of comparisons and added an author’s note to further explain the concept of similes and metaphors. 

 

My newly layered concept book “sandwich” was ready to deliver to


editors. After a few nibbles from different houses, Maria Dismondy at Cardinal Rule Press sunk her teeth in and offered me a contract. 

 

Now that I can hold KINDNESS IS A KITE STRING in my hands, I really appreciate the value of the added layers. They provide readers with a reason to return to the book again and again and discover different ways to satisfy their appetite… and spread a little kindness!  

 

  

 

Michelle Schaub is a language arts teacher and award-winning children's poet. In addition to her upcoming book, Kindness is a Kite String, The Uplifting Power of Empathy, she is the author of the picture book poetry collections Fresh-Picked Poetry: A Day at the Farmers’ Market, (which won the 2018 Growing Good Kids Award and 2019 Northern Lights Book Award,) and Finding Treasure: A Collection of Collections. She also wrote the bedtime STEM book in verse, Dream Big, Little Scientists. Her poems appear in several anthologies, including A World Full of Poems (DK, 2020) and Hop to It, Poems to Get You Moving (Pomelo Books, 2020) Aloud.  Michelle shares lessons and mentor texts for using poetry to boost literacy at www.poetryboost.com.   Find out more about Michelle at https://www.michelleschaub.com/

 

 

Wednesday, October 30, 2019

Debut Cover Reveal! for Claire Annette Noland

By Janie Reinart & Claire Annette Noland



Hi, I’m Evie, and I’m excited to tell you about a new book


I love to jump, run, and win and I have the trophies and ribbons to prove it.  

I was super excited and ready to compete in our school Field Day.

My friends kept winning and everyone cheered. 
Except me
I hate losing. 
Finally, during the last race of the day, I was winning
But something happened and I had to make a big decision
You can read all about it in a new book starring me called: 
EVIE’S FIELD DAY – More Than One Way to Win 
Today is the day that I get to share the cover -
Ready, 

           set, 
         
                   go -



I'm super excited for you to preorder here.


Now – here’s a few words from author Claire Annette Noland and illustrator Alicia Teba.


Claire, what inspired you to write Evie’s Field Day?
C.N. As a mom and teacher, I’ve seen first hand how hard it is for children to lose when playing games and sports. On the other hand, some winners aren’t very gracious. I wanted to write a story exploring the issue of sportsmanship and the old saying “it’s not whether you win or lose but how you play the game.” Children are under so much pressure these days. I just want them to be able to have fun and encourage each other.
Alicia, what about the text drew you to illustrate Evie’s Field Day?
A.T. I just fell in love with Evie's character. She is a strong and brave little girl who wants to be the best and number one in all she does. I related to this, as she wants to be perfect, but she finds that being perfect or the number one is not what really matters. It is good to win if you enjoy the process, but if you are sad and have anxiety you are doing it wrong. Playing is already winning and most importantly, little things in life bring you more happiness than winning a competition. 
Claire, can you tell us about the road to publication for Evie’s Field Day?
I read a call for submissions from Maria Dismondy of Cardinal Rule Press. She was looking for manuscripts featuring children facing a problem. I knew I had a manuscript that fit her specifications so I sent it along. Amazingly, when I got “the call,” Maria shared that a friend had recently asked her if she had suggestions for a child who really struggled with losing. Then, my story came into her mailbox. Perfect timing, right?
I am really enjoying the process of publication with Cardinal Rule Press. The communication has been clear and frequent. I was able to participate in a marketing class taught by Maria and understand how much needs to happen for a successful book launch. I have redone my website and been trying to increase my social media presence. One of the most positive aspects of this adventure has been becoming a member of the 2020 Debut Crew which is a group of debut picture book authors working together to promote each other’s books.


Alicia, can you tell us a bit about how you illustrated Evie’s Field Day?

When Maria Dismondy from Cardinale Rule Press told me about the idea of using black and white and basic colors for the book, I loved the idea, as one of my favorite techniques is using pencil in a sketchy style. 
Since I was little, I have always loved to draw. It is such a pleasure when I can work with characters and stories that move me and that can make me enjoy the process. This was definitely the case.

Congratulations Claire and Alicia! You are blue ribbon winners. Have a great run with Evie.

Thank so much, Janie, and the rest of the fabulous GROG bloggers for hosting the cover reveal. EVIE’S FIELD DAY – More Than One Way to Win  (Cardinal Rule Press) will be racing to a bookshelf near you in May 2020.

Evie wants one lucky reader to have the opportunity to win a copy of Evie’s Field Day! Just leave a comment and a name will be chosen to receive the book when it is released in May of 2020.
Evie’s Field Day is available for preorder on Amazon: 
Claire Annette Noland writes from her home in Central California. You can learn more at https://claireannettenoland.com/ 
Twitter: @claire_noland
Also, visit her blog at http://afieldtriplife.com/
Alicia Teba illustrates books, stationary, calendars, book covers and more from her home in Spain. You can learn more at
Twitter: @AliciaTeba