Showing posts with label onomatopeia. mentor texts. Show all posts
Showing posts with label onomatopeia. mentor texts. Show all posts

Monday, February 2, 2015

One Plastic Bag: More Than a Picture Book! by Kathy Halsey

ONE PLASTIC BAG: ISATOU CEESAY AND THE RECYCLING WOMEN OF THE GAMBIA by Miranda Paul, illustrated by Elizabeth Zunon, is more than an informational picture book. It's collaboration and celebration; a lesson in sustainability; a lesson for picture book writers to immerse themselves in craft and best practices, too. 


Collaboration & Sustainability
The women who brought this book to fruition have many talents that are woven together by the shared passion of making difference for our environment and for our children. Isatou, a Gambian woman, began to view the utilitarian plastic bag at a threat to the beauty of Njau, her home. Along with five other women, she washed, crocheted, and transformed these bags into purses. Isatou's call for solutions led to an economic engine that continues to make a difference. Earnings from the plastic purses funded a community center focused on literacy and empowerment, a true cause for celebration.

Isatou and Miranda
Elizabeth at work in the studio
Miranda's path to Gambia and her debut picture book One Plastic Bag began when she traveled there in 2003 to volunteer and teach. On Miranda's third visit, she finally met Isatou and the women who inspired her to write her debut book. Miranda has been involved in environmental issues since she was young, and her picture book and web site engage readers to consider the consequences of one person, one plastic bag and what one more voice/ call to action can produce.
 Now add the third creative woman, illustrator Elizabeth Zunon, who grew up in West Africa and graduated from RISD, and there is powerful magic. Elizabeth incorporates real plastic bags & cut-up magazines in her mixed media collages and children's book illustrations. The efforts of all these creative women make ONE PLASTIC BAG a book that can be used by scouting troops, teachers, and parents alike.

  •  ONE PLASTIC BAG is great study for picture book writers, too.  The first page of text introduces us immediately to the main character Isatou and the setting We know our MC is cold and uncomfortable, and the scene uses sensory details other than sight to  transport the reader to Njau.  
  •  The simple refrain of "one, two, then ten" begins on page 7 and does not change until the solution to the conflict begins. "One friend helps, then two, then five."




  •  The  problems the Gambian people face with plastic is laid out in threes: the ugliness, goats dying; mosquitoes. 
  •  Authentic vocabulary from Wolof is used sparingly and simply. Miranda imparts information in sprinkles for a young audience.
  •  The pages turns at the end are so powerful, and the final solution and picture of happy goats and a clean environment grace the last page.  
  •  Interesting, educational back matter begins w/the author's note which personalizes the story. Then the Wolof Glossary and pronunciation guide, timeline, and further reading are provided.  


It is no wonder ONE PLATIC BAG: ISATOU CESSAY AND THE RECYCLING WOMEN OF THE GAMBIA has debuted to acclaim and star reviews! Bravo Miranda, Isatou, and Elizabeth! First one, then two, now YOU can add your comments about this true story!







Monday, March 31, 2014

Rhyme Time

 by Kathy Halsey
Today I'm featuring my grandson's favorite rhyming picture book as a mentor text for all of you joining me in Angie Karcher's RhyPiBoMo.
 Check out her FAQ page because there's still time to join in on all the fun. OK, confession time, here - rhyming is out of my comfort zone, and that's why I'm up for this challenge that began with guest bloggers and lessons March 30. Angie has even created a super list of rhyming books to serve as mentor texts for all of us would-be rhymers!   
SKELETON CAT by Kristyn Crow, illustrated by Dan Krall has been read to death by my three year old grandson and me. This cute picture book has plenty of onomatopoeia and is just plain fun to read aloud.The rhythm is so catchy that Tobin recites lines from it while he plays outside! The plot is simple but hooks readers right away. Who doesn't dream of being in a rock and roll band? Skeleton cat auditions as a drummer for a rock band, and the rhyme/rhythm really echo a drummer's beat. (I've been listening to my hubby play drums for 25 years now, and Kristyn Crow has got the drum cadence down cold!)   
I double-dog dare you to recite the following lines from SKELETON CAT aloud. Go ahead, no one's listening... 
"He went: Rattle, rattle. Clink, clink. Rattle, rattle clink. Tip tap. Clickety-clack, ka-plink, ka-plink, ka-plink. He rocked and he rollicked and he clunked around, and the kids in a playground heard the rattlin' sound..." See, it's addicting, right? Rhyming is fun!
Go to your favorite local bookstore, head to the library, and stock up NOW for RhyPiBoMo. Please comment on YOUR go-to rhymer on the GROG and enter to win great prizes as our launch party continues! 
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