Monday, June 15, 2015

WRITING SCIENCE BOOKS FOR KIDS--PART 2 by: Sherri Jones Rivers

Today I have the privilege of sharing wisdom and insight from a writing friend and fellow SOUTHERN BREEZER, Heather Montgomery.

                                                  

                                          


She knows her stuff, and we can learn a lot from her. So, let's get started.

What can you tell us about the types of science books that are out there? 

Heather:

I think it is first important to understand the many categories of NF science books. The first distinction is between writing for the education market (text books, series books written for school libraries, exam questions, etc.) and writing for the trade market (those sold in a book store). I've done both, and they are very different. Within those categories, books also fall into main types, i.e. survey type books (try to cover a subject broadly), how-to books, etc. Melissa Stewart does a good job of explaining some of these on her blog:
http://celebratescience.blogspot.com/2014/10/behind-books-nonfiction-types.html.

What drew you to writing for the science market?

Heather:

I love getting kids hooked on science. I wanted to teach even more kids than I could reach in my profession (environmental education). Now that I've published WILD DISCOVERIES:WACKY NEW ANIMALS with Scholastic, I know my teaching will reach tens of thousands of kids.


                                               

                         


Do you know of any topics that librarians are asking for that they are not finding on the shelves?

Heather:

Teachers and librarians often request fun physical science books (heat, friction, simple machines, energy, waves, etc.) They also are looking for earth science books (rocks, soil, lightning, tornadoes, etc.) There aren't as many trade books on those topics and educators are looking to get kids hooked on those subject areas as well. My book HOW TO SURVIVE AN EARTHQUAKE



  is one way Capstone Publishing tied a more commercial idea (survival) with an earth science content that teachers were looking for.



                                                                   


What credentials, if any, does a writer need to write a science-related book?


Heather:


I don't think a writer necessarily needs strong science credentials to write a good science-related book, as long as they are good at researching and are careful to get their manuscript vetted by a scientist. Sometimes I think that when a writer doesn't have a strong science background, they are better at not writing over the heads of children. That said, a science degree, teaching experience or other professional experience in science does look good on a cover letter.




What, if anything, makes writing about science different from, say, a biography?


Heather:


In writing a trade book about science, I think one of the greatest differences is structure. A biography already has an inherent story structure (timeline through their life). When you are writing about science, the structure is wide open. This is refreshing because you have so many options, but also challenging because you need to pick a structure that supports your theme/main concept. Finding the right structure is often one of my greatest challenges, but when I do, it really makes the book work as a whole and takes it from being an info dump to a revelation of a new idea. It took me six years of revision to find the right structure for my upcoming book HOW RUDE:10 REAL BUGS WHO WON'T MIND THEIR MANNERS, but now the humor and science information support each other and do those bad boy bugs justice.










What advice would you give someone who wants to break into the field?


Heather:

The best way to learn about this kind of writing is to read, read, read. I try to read 100 recent works in any new market that I want to write for. It gives me a huge advantage in terms of understanding what is already out there, what works, what doesn't work, and what editors are looking for.

What are some books that you think are outstanding and would recommend to readers?

Heather:

That's hard because there are so many good individual titles out there and "outstanding" is all dependent on what you are looking for. I could recommend anything by Nicola Davies, Joyce Sidman, or Sy Montgomery. I can also recommend the "Scientists in The Field" series by Houghton Mifflin, Melissa Stewart's FEATHERS:NOT JUST FOR FLYING,
EARTH SHAKE:POEMS FROM THE GROUND UP by Lisa Westberg Peters, and
VULTURE VIEW by April Pulley Sayre.

Thank you, Heather, and we look forward to your book about rude bugs. Kids are going to love it!




Friday, June 12, 2015

Book Giveaway! Lisa Kahn Schnell's HIGH TIDE FOR HORSESHOE CRABS -- and Conversation with the Author, by Christy Mihaly

I’m excited to share an interview with picture book author Lisa Kahn Schnell, and to announce a great give-away.

Lisa’s debut book, High Tide for Horseshoe Crabs, is a lyrical look at a fascinating subject not often considered: horseshoe crabs. And she’s giving away a signed copy to a lucky GROG reader—just comment below for your chance to win!

In this nonfiction picture book, Lisa takes a close look at horseshoe crabs and their life cycle. She makes her topic appealing to kids and adults alike, in a beautifully written and beautifully illustrated 40-page book, published this spring by Charlesbridge. Don't just take my word for it: Kirkus and SLJ both gave it starred reviews. After reading this book, you’ll be looking out for horseshoe crabs on your next walk on the beach! (And be sure to check out the illustrations in this post -- you'll love them.)

Lisa Kahn Schnell
Lisa and I have known one another “virtually”—as members of an online critique group—for almost two years. That made it especially fun for me to meet lovely Lisa in real life, last fall at Falling Leaves – the fabulous SCBWI master class retreat in upstate New York.

Lisa was kind enough to answer a few questions for GROG.

Q: First, Lisa--CONGRATULATIONS on the publication of High Tide for Horseshoe CrabsPlease tell us about this poetic picture book.

A: Thank you for your kind words!

High Tide for Horseshoe Crabs introduces readers to the amazing horseshoe crab. Each spring, horseshoe crabs spawn up and down the east coast of the United States. They come together in especially large numbers on the beaches of Delaware Bay. During this spawning season, many species of migrating shorebirds—and a myriad of other animals—feed on the crabs’ tiny nutritious eggs. Scientists, volunteers, and other curious people arrive to observe the birds and horseshoe crabs, too.

Horseshoe crabs were on the planet millions of years before the dinosaurs. They’re critical ecologically and for human health, too. I am fascinated by the importance of an animal I’ve taken for granted for most of my life, and I hope my book conveys that enthusiasm, along with lots of information.

Double-page spread from High Tide for Horseshoe Crabs
 Q: Your book demonstrates your love of nature. How can parents and teachers use books like yours to get kids outdoors, and to get involved with nature?

A: I love spending time outside, and I find nature endlessly fascinating and inspiring. I have had some great teachers over the years who have shared knowledge, encouraged my questions, and helped me feel comfortable outdoors.

I love the way certain books can be as inviting as a good teacher. For example, the books in the Scientists in the Field series feel like personal guides to places and subjects I might never get to know about otherwise. I wanted my book to do the same sort of thing, but for younger children--to introduce the child and their adult reader to the subject in a way that makes it feel approachable and welcoming.

Part of what amazed me about horseshoe crabs is that I’d been going to the beach all my life and had never realized this incredible natural phenomenon was happening right there where I was standing. I know not everyone will visit the horseshoe crabs in person, but I will be very happy if my book encourages people to look around—wherever they are—and ask simple questions. “What is happening in the natural world near me?” “What can I observe and learn about directly, right here where I am?” That sort of investigation doesn’t require any special equipment—it can happen in a city schoolyard or while mucking around in a stream.

Q: What made you choose this subject for your first book?

A. A well-timed walk on the beach! I saw a horseshoe crab and wanted to know more about it. When I started looking for information, I couldn’t find much, and was surprised how little was available, especially for young readers. Once I started researching more thoroughly, I found lots of intriguing material. The project developed from there.    

Q: I love the way you’ve layered the text. The basic story, from “It’s starting,” to “They’re arriving,” then “They’re laying,” etc., is outlined in big, bold, brief headlines. On each page of text, a fuller explanation follows of what’s happening on the beach and in the crab’s cycle of life. How did you arrive at this approach?

A. The structure of the book is the result of a lot of writing and re-writing and winnowing of information. There was so much I wanted to include! 

I got to see the crab spawning action first-hand, and that affected me enormously. In the end, I decided that I most wanted to capture the energy and excitement of everything coming together—the horseshoe crabs, of course, but also the arrival of the migrating birds, and the humans, too. I particularly loved the fact that that humans were easy to include in this natural history story. This draft started as just the two-word phrases—the minimum required to capture the major moments. I thought that was a bit too spare, so I added the longer text on each page. The back matter developed during the editing process.


Q: Alan Marks created the gorgeous (and scientifically accurate) illustrations for the book. I particularly love the detailed horseshoe crab diagrams on the ends. How involved were you in the design and illustration? 

A: I was quite involved with the illustration process, and I feel very lucky that I had that opportunity. It was fun for me to learn how the illustration process works—how images develop and change, and the extent to which they are fact checked…and checked again. And again! (Especially those endpapers. Oh my!) It was also fascinating to me to see how a professional illustrator works. Alan was so FAST! And he responded to suggestions and necessary changes graciously.

Because my book is nonfiction, I had quite a bit of input. Also, my editor at Charlesbridge was wonderful about including me in the process and allowing my input right from the start. I really appreciated that!

Q: I understand you have recently taken art classes and are honing your artistic talents – painting and drawing. How has that affected your writing?

A: I earned a Fine Arts minor in college, but I never thought I could draw. A few years ago, at a time when I was down and needed to do something just for me, I decided to take art classes again. I’m learning to draw, paint, and make art with all sorts of media, and I love it!
Lisa Kahn Schnell, acrylic
Sometimes art feels like a complete sidetrack to writing. Like I’m…not wasting my time, exactly, but ridiculously unfocused. Then there are those moments when I realize that art is art. Practicing careful observation, learning how to capture a mood or emotion, portraying whatever it is that transfixes me about a subject—these all apply to both visual art and writing. It all works together. Whatever the medium, I see my job as conveying both knowledge and emotion in a way that someone else can feel it, too, even if they can’t interact with the subject directly.

Lisa Kahn Schnell, Ink
Lisa Kahn Schnell, Pencil
  












Before my horseshoe crab manuscript was accepted, I used it as the basis for my first attempt at illustration. I worked with a friend who is an illustration professor at the local university. The results were not publishable—I didn’t even send them to the publisher for consideration. However, I had fun and learned a lot by trying! And even though I couldn’t execute the art to my liking, I passed some of the ideas on to my editor, who shared them with the illustrator. He did a great job with them, and I was happy to have had some small part in the illustration process.

Q: As a dancer as well as a painter, you’re pretty busy . . . . How do these other activities interact with your writing?

A: Dancing and visual arts are more immediately tactile and sensual than writing usually is for me (though I’ve been known to cut a manuscript into bits to play with different configurations!), so with those activities, it’s easier for me to escape my noisy brain and reset. Art and dancing keep me sane—and dancing keeps me in reasonably good physical shape—which is a good thing for my writing, and everything else, too!
Lisa Kahn Schnell, water color

Q: What’s your writing process? Do you outline?

A: I’m still figuring out my writing process. So far, it seems to be managed chaos, just like the rest of my life. I do not outline, though I wouldn’t rule anything out. For me the most difficult part of writing is finding a structure for the mess of information and ideas I’ve collected on a given topic. That part of the process always feels sooo slow.

Q: Do you write exclusively nonfiction? What do you like about nonfiction? How do you select a topic?

A: I definitely gravitate toward nonfiction, though I have a couple of fiction pieces that I’m working on, too. I’m not willing to limit myself at this point—I’m still figuring out what I like and am able to do.

Part of what I like about writing nonfiction is that it gives me the excuse to get out in the field and learn from scientists who are passionate about whatever it is they study.

So far I have selected topics (in the broader sense) that appeal to me in some way I can’t always define—a gut reaction to something, a subject that I keep hearing about for some reason, simple curiosity. I have a Master’s degree in botany (plant ecology, really). I am especially interested in topics that let me learn more about biology of any sort, since that often means I get to go outside to do some of the research!

Q:  Books and curiosity seem to go together . . . Do you have thoughts about how can we encourage kids to range freely through the library, and the world, with books?

A: I wish children could spend less time doing things like standardized testing, and more time following their own curiosity and asking questions—in the library, outside, wherever they are. One big thing I learned when I was studying for my Master’s degree is that there are still so many questions that haven’t been answered. Part of what I love is learning how much we don't know, and the creative ways people are trying to answer basic questions. I hope that by helping children see science as something alive—not just lists of facts—they’ll understand that there is a place for them to actively participate in the process. 

Q: For readers inspired to pick up a copy of High Tide for Horseshoe Crabs, where is it available?

A: Wherever books are sold! I always encourage people to shop at their local indie bookstore though, if they’re lucky enough to have one.

Lisa, thanks so much for these thoughtful answers . . .  and for offering a signed copy of your book to a lucky GROG reader.

Cheddar awaits your comments!
Readers: Please leave a comment below. If you’d like to be included in the drawing for a signed copy of Lisa’s book, mention that in your comment.

You have until June 26 to enter. My mascot, Cheddar, will assist in selecting the random winning entry. We’ll contact the lucky winner on July 1.

Wednesday, June 10, 2015

What's New at the Library?

By Leslie Colin Tribble

I thought it might be interesting to investigate the new picture books at my library. This is a public library and our children's librarian keeps books labeled as new and on the "new" shelf for about six months. These books circulate a lot - I know because I used to shelve them!

Here's a roundup of a few fiction picture books that caught my eye:

First Snow, Peter McCarty (new at the library in January 2015)

I gravitate to any book with animals on the front and Peter McCarty's illustrations are so cute I just want to take all of the critters on the cover home with me. I love all his books - endearing illustrations and sparse but engaging text. In First Snow, cousin Pedro (from some far off southland) comes to visit. When it starts to snow Pedro isn't very happy because he doesn't think he likes cold. Pedro changes his mind though with the help of the neighborhood children.

Peter McCarty's lively text is magic. The 433 words are mostly dialogue and much of that word count is actually a listing of the some of the animal children's names. Out of that 433 words over 60 words are either a name or "said". Now the action is spelled out in less than 400 words making it quick and to the point.

The Skunk, written by Mac Barnett and illustrated by Patrick McDonnell (new April 2015)

Again, another animal on the front - this one a very determined but stealthy-looking skunk. I had to read this one to see what the skunk and the man would do. I loved the illustrations - the skunk's bright red nose is wonderful. This book has a much higher word count - 596 so take heart those of you who can't get their story under the magic 500. This is a great book to spark some discussion between parent and child about what the skunk's intentions might be, and why the man made the decision he did at the ending. Lots of fun with simple but very effective illustrations and use of color. The pictures reminds me of the old Danny and the Dinosaur books. Too fun!

Sidewalk Flowers, written by Jon Arno Lawson and illustrated by Sydney Smith (new March 2015)

This wordless book was a great read. A little girl gathers flowers as she walks along with her distracted father and she gives the flowers as gifts to various recipients. This book could also create dialog between adult and child about friendship, giving, the meaning of gifts and the discovery of unexpected beauty around us. The illustrations are full of detail with only splashes of color. A beautiful and quiet book to be appreciated on a slow and thoughtful type of day.

Small Bunny's Blue Blanket - Tatyana Feeney (new March 2015)

This is the classic story of a child and their, ultimately necessary for life, blanket. I read this to my young adult daughter who totally appreciated the relationship between Small Bunny and Blue Blanket. Tatyana Feeney's illustrations are very simple - bordering on exagerated line drawings - but the expressions she gives Small Bunny are priceless. I loved this book. It was a simple and fresh look at a age-old relationship.

This is Sadie, written by Sara O'Leary and illustrated by Julie Morstead (new May 2015)

Sadie has a big imagination and she spends her days living out whatever she thinks about. This book will appeal to children who also are small but have big imaginations like Sadie. In her they will find a kindred spirit. The illustrations are a perfect pairing with the text, which is only 354 words. My favorite page was second to the last, "Sadie likes to make boats of boxes and castles out of cushions. But more than anything she likes stories, because you can make them from nothing at all."

Isn't that what we as authors do?

What books are new at your library?

Monday, June 8, 2015

Revision: Time to Make Your Writing Better ~Suzy Leopold

The American Heritage dic . tion. ary defines revision [ri-vizh-uh n] as:
1. The act or work of revising. 
2. To prepare a newly edited version of a text.
3. To reconsider and change or modify.
4. A revised or new version, as of a book or other written material. 
Simply stated, the word revision means to see again

You’ve written your story and are excited to share it with a critique partner, or better yet send it off for submission to an agent or publisher. You feel your story is wonderful and unique and word perfect. Completing your story is a great feeling. You have worked hard and it is a time to celebrate. 

Stop. 

Your manuscript is not ready yet. There is no manuscript or work that is perfectly written and polished the very first time. A manuscript is not ready for submission until revisions are made. 

As a writer, revision is a critical part of the writing process. Many writers seem to dread this step and sometimes skip it. Revision is like practicing the piano or participating in baseball practice. It is a necessary step that must not be over looked. It is a part of the writing process that begins with a draft, followed by many revisions, to a manuscript that is polished and ready for submission.

Time to see a new vision for your manuscript. Time to see your story in a new light. Time to make the necessary changes for improvement. Time to reimagine what you story can be.

Revision is not the same as editing. Good writers separate composing from transcription.

Revision
Editing
Redo/resequence/rewrite Grammar
Prune/cut a section Paragraphing
Focus on a particular part Capital Letters
Adjust and change Spelling
Add a section Punctuation

1. Distance yourself 
The completion of your manuscript is hard work. You wrote and wrote and typed and typed, expressing your ideas and thoughts that became a story. 

Excellent! Reward yourself. 
Chocolate Chip Cookies & Milk
Now step back after reading your manuscript aloud one last time before setting your story aside for the time being. Let your manuscript rest. Let it simmer. Fresh eyes will allow you to see the manuscript more objectively.

You may feel the need to revise right away. Do not do so. Do not revise yet. Walk away from your story. Better yet, go for a walk.

Take a few days away from the manuscript and allow the story to mull around in your brain for awhile. As thoughts cross your mind, jot down the ideas that you may want to consider for revision.

2. Look at your manuscript with a critical eye by reading aloud
After distancing yourself from your manuscript, it is time to look back at your manuscript with fresh eyes. This can be difficult. Pretend that you are reading someone else’s work. Read your story as if you are critiquing a manuscript for a writerly friend. 
  • Concentrate on different areas of revision.
For the first read-through look closely at the content of the story.
Does it sound right?
  • Rearrange sentences so they are logical and effective.
Do you have a mental image of what is being described?
Are the sentences well developed and well elaborated?
Did you include sensory details? 
Think about what it looks like? What does it sound like? 
What does it feel like? What does it taste like? What does it smell like? 
  • Think about your character.
Has your main character developed and solved his/her problem?
  • Think about the pacing.
The story should be natural and not choppy.
Is your writing fresh and original?
Does the story flow with a story arc?
Do you need every scene?
Does the beginning hook the reader and set the stage?
  • The ending should be satisfying and unpredictable.
3. Time for a second read aloud
  • Read one sentence at a time.
  • Read your own work backwards. 
Does each sentence make sense?
  • Consider the word count and delete any unnecessary words. 
  • Circle all of the verbs. 
Are the verbs strong?
Choose strong verbs


  • Use clearer, stronger details.
  • Cut anything that is not making your story shine.
Remove unnecessary information or extra details. 

Weed through unnecessary words:
and, but, just, now, really, so, that, then, very, well.
  • Are you showing and not telling?
4. Time for a third read aloud 
Yes, a third read-aloud. If you are tired of reading your story aloud, how do you think the audience may feel? Children’s books are meant to be read aloud. A picture book needs to have re-readability.
  • Look carefully at the dialogue. 
  • Listen to the rhythm.  
  • Highlight all of the dialogue.
Does the dialogue between the characters move the story forward?
Is the character coming to life in the story?
The dialogue should not exceed thirty percent of the word count.
Think about dialogue
As you work to make your writing better, keep in mind that revisions should be exciting. The many revisions can turn ordinary writing into extraordinary writing. True authors go through many revisions before actually publishing.

Go. 

Time to change your manuscript. Your manuscript needs revisions so it can be the best it can be. Revising is reimagining. Time to revise your manuscript.
Asiatic Lilies from my Prarie Garden